The rest of your application looks just fine, but your first person sample falls a few sentences short of our requirement of 10 sentences of dialogue. You may either rewrite your current sample, write an entirely new sample, or respond to a Q&A:

<b>1. What makes you happy?</b> <b>2. Do you have any secrets? Would you ever tell them to anyone? What would make you reveal them?</b> <b>3. Do you consider yourself to be special in any way? Explain.</b> <b>4. Who is the most important person in your life, and why?</b> <b>5. What is your greatest fear?</b>