Sorry for the long delay on response to this. However, I would like to ask for some revisions here.
Firstly, I'd like to ask for an expansion of his strengths and weaknesses. You describe some of his specific Digimon-related weaknesses/strengths without translating what those things might mean in a panfandom RP setting such as this. Try to think of his strengths in a more literal sense - what would he be strong enough to do or lift? Also, while we do accept bullet pointed lists, I simply don't think you provide enough detail, so a few sentences each more expansion in each section would be great.
Secondly, I'm having serious trouble actually hearing Guilmon's voice in his sample - it unfortunately comes across as kind of generic. I'd like to give you a Q&A to fill out.
Finally, there's not a lot about Takato in Guilmon's personality! You have about four sentences, and considering just how vital Takato is to Guilmon, I'd like to see a little expansion on their relationship and how it affects Guilmon. Another paragraph or so would be great.
Again, sorry for the delay, and if you have any questions feel free to PM the mod account or my own personal account, revolutionary. Thanks!
Revision Request
Firstly, I'd like to ask for an expansion of his strengths and weaknesses. You describe some of his specific Digimon-related weaknesses/strengths without translating what those things might mean in a panfandom RP setting such as this. Try to think of his strengths in a more literal sense - what would he be strong enough to do or lift? Also, while we do accept bullet pointed lists, I simply don't think you provide enough detail, so a few sentences each more expansion in each section would be great.
Secondly, I'm having serious trouble actually hearing Guilmon's voice in his sample - it unfortunately comes across as kind of generic. I'd like to give you a Q&A to fill out.
Finally, there's not a lot about Takato in Guilmon's personality! You have about four sentences, and considering just how vital Takato is to Guilmon, I'd like to see a little expansion on their relationship and how it affects Guilmon. Another paragraph or so would be great.
Again, sorry for the delay, and if you have any questions feel free to PM the mod account or my own personal account,