My apologies if the above request wasn't clear. The kind of expansion I'm looking for requires you to do a little more justifying of his strengths and his weaknesses. For example, you mention he's strong willed and steadfast in his decision making. A claim like this should be accompanied by a concrete example from the film or -- alternatively -- from well-reasoned headcanon. Please provide evidence for as many of the strengths and weaknesses as you can.

Although we do accept bullet points, it looks like you might have better luck with this section if you tried to work through it in paragraphs -- especially considering the comparative strength of your personality section. How do you feel about attemping to explain Holmes's strengths and weaknesses with sections separated into his physical, mental, and emotional atributes?